The voice track could be strengthened. At the moment it's the song's weak point because it's nowhere near clear or magnetic/interesting enough.
Good songs have a climax and your song lacks this. It's the same throughout the whole song, boring.
Also, the song is a bit too long.
You obviously have talent. Keep on trying. Best of luck!
AMAZING
5
By edie sheldon
Dude,
This song just kept giving me the chills. I know you will have a good career in music bro. This song was soo original, this song exemplified you bro, this song was you. I loved it bro, amazing job.
- Your boy Sunny P
